The time has passed. I don’t know when it actually happened but it had happened. I read an article suggested by my friend. It was about someone who apparently “doubting” the existence of Indonesia, my beloved country. I don’t expect more than his masterpieces at the first time. However, now people considered him for kinda bad. Yes, it was one of my favorite singer, JB who tried to speak about his experiences in my country.
Let’s say that it was nothing but just some “bloopies”. I see now or we could say that talking something about one’s country is really really sensitive for ever. In my opinion, I believe that every single country in this world is more than special. We can see its geography, culture, people, building, education, government, habit, custom, service, health, and many others are very unique. They can vary. We could not simply say or judge that it is not good just because my behalf is not upheld Depends on my standard. Many aspects should be considered at the very first place to judge something as good or pathetic. Moreover if this matter is related to societies’ behalf, maybe we could consider it more. Even if it is true, that a country belongs to a failed state, we should contribute together to fix it not even exacerbate the condition by saying inappropriate thing.
Time to relax from the sensitive issues is when you talking this matter with someone you definitely know well. You will get trouble when you say something crazy beside someone who you don’t know at all. Yeah, believe me. LOL
your writing is really good.However, I find some mistakes in it.
BalasHapusIn your second paragraph you wrote “One of her troop, named Doyle was one of the brilliant troops in the Komee navy.” It should be “One of her troops…..”
“Moreover, the thing that could not be neglected was he had really charming face.”
It should be,
“……he had a really charming face”
“They get closer and more since the incident in the last rehearsal when she was exhausted felt unconscious in the ship far from Edinburgh.”
It should be,
“they got closer….”
In the next paragraph, “He is not only a boy, he has name, father,”
It will be better if it is “………………he is not just a boy, he has a name, father.”
In the last sentence, “Nobody is allowed to break the rule, neither do you”
It should be “Nobody is allowed to break the rule, neither are you”
In the next paragraph
“I’m is nothing if compared to my faith to this Kingdom, Your Majesty”
“I am nothing if compared…”
in the next paragraph, “The last minutes, the smaller lion seemed lost and at the same moment the princess run to unlock the entrance and made Doyle could go and free.”
It should be “…..at the same moment the princess ran to unlock…”
However your skill in writing is great. It is proved by seeing the variety of vocabulary you use, your vocabulary mastering is sophisticated. Thank you.